Khubsoorat ho tum par Lajwab nahi,
Sheetal to ho bahut hi Per chandni nahi,Ho rag tum agr par ragni nahi,
Damak rahi ho kisi tej ki tarah,
Chapla ho tum Par damini nahi ,
Phoolon ki khushboo hai ,
Tere badan main basi hui ,
Tumhare pyar ki pratimurti hai
Mere man main rachi hui,
Pal pal khil rahi ho Kisi kali ki tarah,
Kamniya ho tum Par kamini nahi
Baloon main chupa tera chehraYoon lag raha hai ,
Jaise badlon main Umadti ghumadi ghata
Tere nayanon main dikhte hain Din ke ujaale
Adhron pe teri pyas bhariMad ke hain pyale
Madmast ho rahi ho Kisi mayur ki tarah
Nari ho tum purn par afsosh ki ardhangni nahi..!!
4 comments:
wOw .. I can see d real Krishnaaaaaaa..... Kya bat hai itne romantic kab se ho gaye Jnab... :)
Kavi mahasay ...aap kahain to hum bat chalain ..[;)]
the poem in itself presents the practicality f ur character
instead f simply naming ur beloved to b the best on earth . perfect in all aspects
u hav been very rational while describing her
that meas .. u do admire her qualities .. u r in love wid her .. bt at the same time .. u r aware f the fact that there may b smbody.. having more f the qualitis in her .. bt still.... it wont affect u
den .. at a part in the poem .. the craziness f lover cn easily b felt
n den finally .. u mention the truth .. that .. wid all these qualties ,, ur crazy love .. the girl z still nt yours .. bt dat simply doesnt matters .. bcoz love has no cnditions .. it "is" .. just it "is ".
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